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Post by Pyris on Nov 27, 2006 16:17:53 GMT -5
Pyris furrowed her brows, imitating being lost in thought. "I'll go with the elves. I won't be there long, only a night or two," she stated firmly. She didn't want to over-stay her welcome.
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Post by Gregos on Nov 27, 2006 19:16:20 GMT -5
Gregorz smiled and replied, "Ok Pyris, here is your key to the house. I hope you have a wonderful night or two here, and if you ever want to talk to me, I live to the north east of the first dwarf cave in a house like your going to."
((>.< I can't stress enough on grammar. Nobody likes to roleplay with someone who has bad grammar.))
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Post by Pyris on Nov 27, 2006 23:43:15 GMT -5
((I fixed your errors in red.... but seriously, I'm going to start correcting your posts in my posts, so you can see the difference.))
Pyris nodded, taking the key from Gregorz. "I don't know the way there," she said, realizing she didn't know where exactly she was. I don't want to look like a complete idiot.
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Post by Gregos on Nov 28, 2006 12:29:26 GMT -5
((i told you im a newb with grammar and i will always be like that i know i am )) Gregorz smiled and then said to her, "Its ok, please follow me."
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Post by Pyris on Nov 29, 2006 16:18:03 GMT -5
((The whole point of a private session is to learn what you're doing wrong. You can't join Literate roleplays if you aren't literate. And so far, that's really the only big issue you have against you.)) Pyris nodded, wondering where exactly she was. I remember the beginning of the forest..... I wonder where the end is. She glanced around her, taking in the surroundings. At least this guy's a really nice one. I'd hate to have to slit his throat. She fingered the clasp on her sword sheath, imagining how the boy might fight. ((Instead of just one-lining something, you could elaborate on what he's thinking, to make your post a little bit longer, and help emphasize your character's personality. ))
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Post by Gregos on Feb 10, 2007 14:56:05 GMT -5
Gregorz smiled and thought to himself, That girls really nice, but i would really hate it if we got into a fight, I bet thats why shes grasping her sword, as she wants me to fight. Oh well I might as well show her to her cabin.
Gregorz said to her, "Want me to show you to your cabin?"
((is there anythng wrong with this post Pyris. and im sorry for being away for a few months, ive had troubles at home and stuff.))
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Post by wowposter on Nov 4, 2008 4:15:55 GMT -5
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