PVRP: Gregos & Pyris

[Pyris]

Okay. Here we are, you're private RP.

Go ahead and post an intro and we'll go on from there.

[Pyris]

Basic RP Speaking:

((When speaking out of character, or OCC, use parenthasis.))

When potraying thought, use italics.

When saying something, use the good old " ".

When using telepathy, use << >>.

[Gregos]

(thank you i need to think of a setting dont i?)

[Pyris]

((Normally the setting is set up by the rp master, but seeing as I have deemed this your rp, you do need to think of a setting. ^_^ I could probably think one up, but it's your rp, so I'm gunna let you do it. ))

[Gregos]

The Setting:

The setting where this PVRP will take place is Gorogon. Gorogon is a place filed with forests, caves and a lot of dwarves and elves when there are usually orc raids carried out every few months. The houses here are like little houses for the elves and the dwarves live in cave like dwellings. Main places of attraction of this place is the Temple of Rukushu and a few shops to buy supplies and also repair any weapons and/or armour if need be.

((Was that a sucky description for a setting?))

[Pyris]

((Nah, that's just fine. Now you need an intro, to introduce your character into the story.))

[Gregos]

((ok here goes))

Outside a forest, on a beautiful yew tree, sat Gregorz. Gregorz is a down to earth cool guy who cares about nothing that happens to him, but whatever happens to his people, he will deal with the problem. Gregorz was up in the tree, scouting for enemy raiders coming to the town of Gorogon and also watching out for nice looking birds out there too.

[Pyris]

((Outside a forest, on a beautiful yew tree, sat Gregorz. [glow=blue,2,300]Gregorz [/glow]is a down to earth cool guy who cares about nothing that happens to him, but whatever happens to his people, he will deal with the problem. [glow=blue,2,300]Gregorz [/glow]was up in the tree, scouting for enemy raiders coming to the town of Gorogon and also watching out for nice looking birds out there too. ))

((That's your original post. You could try to lengthen your sentences, making them less choppy. And you only need to use your character's name once, unless it's a long post, or you're using more than one character. ^_^ ...Well, your sentences aren't neccessarily choppy or short... Just faintly akward...... But that'll kink itself out, I think. Oh, one more thing. Post in [glow=green,2,300]Past-tense[/glow]))

Pyris strolled along the outskirts of the forest, peering up into the occasional tree, just to see what was there. Sighing, she decided to take a small rest from her stroll and leanded against the nearest tree. She glimpsed over the tree; it seemed to be a yew tree, but she wasn't a botonist.

[Gregos]

((Well i am still like a n00b and a newb when it comes to rp so im sorry if i make things awkward.))

Gregorz forgot about the tree he was in and kicked it by accident, making that tree rustle and, made him lose him balance and fell out of the tree laughing his head off.

[Pyris]

((That's what the PRP is for, Cutie. So you can fix the Noobism.))

Pyris leapt from her spot and looked down at the form at her feet. Unable to contain herself, she began to laugh harshly at the fallen boy. "Oh, Jeez.... Hyne, that's good.... You just like... and FLOP!" she studdered out between laughs and gasps of air. "You could've landed in my lap or something," she finally managed, once her laughter died down. She bent over slightly, taking in the view of the boy on the ground before her. Smiling, she offered him a hand up.

[Gregos]

Gregorz grabbed the hand and raised himself up, looking at the girl[glow=red,2,300]. He[/glow]smiled and introduced himself[glow=red,2,300],[/glow]"Hi my name is Gregorz and [glow=red,2,300]I [/glow]kind of protect the town from the orcs who come to raid here[glow=red,2,300].[/glow]What is your name."




((The things glowing are the things I corrected. When posting, try to watch out for little things like this. K, Cutie?))
((>.< Man, stupid glow tag... makes it space... *scowls*))

[Pyris]

Pyris tilted her head slightly, taking a better look at the boy in front of her. "Pyris," she said flatly, still not sure what to think of him. "I'm nomadic, I travel around from place to place. I was just passing through," she offered in explanation. Figuring the boy was less than harmful, she gave him a smile. "You didn't hurt yourself, now, did you?"

[Gregos]

Gregorz just said plainly,"Iguess I am ok. Wow, your a nomad, thats awesome, Pyris. Would you like to stay here tonight? Iwould gladly take you in."

((Again, your biggest issue is grammar. Your spelling is very good, but you need to capitalize your I's and watch your sentence structure carefully. ^_^ I didn't glow it this time, I just corrected it. I'll start correcting your posts in my own posts, m'kay? ))

[Pyris]

((Like I said, your only real issue is grammar. You flow into roleplay pretty damn well, from what I've seen thus far. Keep up the good work. ^_^))

Pyris smiled faintly, giving the guy her own physical evaluation. He seemed to be okay, so she let it go. At the offer of a place to stay for the night, she became estatic. "That'd be awesome!" she nearly yelped, trying to contain her excitement. She hadn't been looking forward to yet another night of camping in the forest.

[Gregos]

Gregorz thought about it and then asked her, "So where would you like to stay, you can either live in the huts the elves use, or live in the caves the dwarves live in, its your call."