Gregos and Sessh's Private RP

[Sesshoumaru]

Okay, here's the board. Knock yourself out with the setting and your intro, Gregos. ^__^

[Gregos]

The Setting: In a forest where there is a village nearby which has supplies, weapons, armour and a place to stay. The folk are friendly if you enter the village. Behind the village is a castle where the Prince resides and where the most deadly prisoners are kept. And the dangerous part of the area which is the camps and fortress owned by a bandit which owns the camp and the ruthless Knight, Sir Lodric.

My Profile
Name: Gregorz
Gender:Male
Age:17
Hair and Eyes and appearance:

Personality:Gregorz acts alone but he acts cool and calm but does get angered very easily if he gets really annoyed. If people get to know him then he can open up his feelings

History: grew up in a town of Darkshire, outside the city of Gorogon where he was raised up by a group of mystical elves specialised in the arts of the mystic swordsman and decided to train as a martial artist with his old friend the bamboo cane, and offer to help people who need it for a little price of shelter and money if wanted

Introduction
After running into the wrong people, Gregorz ran the hell out of the bandit camp, but trying to take each of the bandits out one by one, but the numbers were too many for him to handle, and eventually was battered by the bandits, and made a run for it to the nearby village, and was unconscious at the entrance.

(was that good enough, if not how can i improve for my next post)

[Sesshoumaru]

(It's not too bad, but you need to try not to run your sentences together. The period is your friend...*pets the period*)

Name: Kimiko Saraha Bakura (goes by Kimi, and if you call her anything else, she'll force-feed you your spleen)

Age: Looks 16-17

Gender: Obviously female

Looks:

Personality: Kimi's pretty much a wanderer, and she likes going different places. She's quite likeable, unless you piss her off first. Then she can be a right nasty little girl.

Intro

Kimi walked towards the entrance of the village, looking entirely too cheerful for her health. Her golden eyes soon caught sight of a prostrate figure just outside her destination.

"Hm? Who's that?" she wondered, skittering closer.

[Gregos]

Gregorz just managed to open his eyes and get up on his own to look at the figure. As he tried to walk over to her, he then fell to his knees, thus passing out again.

[Pyris]

((Short posts are evil... Hey look a she-Sesshoumaru! *point to Kimi* Sorry.... I really couldn't help myself.))